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Red Riding Hood…one of my favorite fairytales. Such darkness in it, such barely concealed sexual tension. Have you read Angela Carter’s The Company of Wolves? I had been thinking about that when I wrote this, and today this poem serves as an eerie precursor to a story on my worktable. Deep themes bubbling to the surface after years of simmering…
RED When he saw her in her scarlet hood his teeth began to grow. Point by point, they filled his jaw and his long, hot tongue caressed them. Red was the color of his desire, the flaming curl against her cheek, the roses there that bloomed with every blush, the cloak that flirted in the shadow of the forest deep, where he followed. When he heard the sprinting fear fleet as a startled doe within her veins, he began to run. He was strong and fast and cunning, but, most frightening of all, he was beautiful. Red was the color of her desire, the burning passion of his gaze, the ruby of his heart, for her alone. When she stopped, breathless, for him the forest gave her up. Red was the color of her death, the blood upon the perfect sheet, and fine as crimson gloves upon his hands.
this gave me chills: "When he saw her in her scarlet hood
his teeth began to grow." well-crafted!
It's both ominous and full of desire. Loved it.