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Garen Marie's avatar

Fantastic start, Liz! You’ve set the scene and the characters so vividly. Seems like a great horror adventure story in the making!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Garen!

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Leanne Shawler's avatar

The prince is a vampire, isn’t he…

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

You’re on to me, Leanne! I’m still working that end of things out, though.

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Barron's avatar

Wonderful tale can’t wait for more.❤️

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Dad!

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Liz! Ohhh, hell yeah. I don't know where to begin. For one thing, fantastic character names. That just flat doesn't happen without a lot of thought. I'm all in and waiting for the next part. - Jim

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Jim! I love figuring out character names. They are important. I think this will be a horror adventure with lots of nods to classic horror characters. But I want depth, too. Will Dovedale is pretty horrible (as we’ll see), but he does have a lot of layers.

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Shane Bzdok's avatar

Dripping in delicious detail, per usual, Liz. If this is the amuse-bouche, then I eagerly await the main course. Hook is set. More, please.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Shane! There is more to come and it gets deeper quickly.

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Renee's avatar

More! Pretty please 🩷

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Renee! More will come soon!

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