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Leanne Shawler's avatar

Algood sounds a bit Jack the Rippery. You have the ambiance down perfectly!

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Leanne! Algood is a nasty piece of work who thinks he’s brilliant. His tutelage will definitely bear dark fruit.

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

That's either unsettlingly brilliant or brilliantly unsettling.

And I agree with Renee - these flashbacks are excellent and insightful. It makes the story as much a character study as a classic gothic romance.

Likewise the contrast between the dirty East End and the lavish aristocracy makes both equally striking.

Anyway - this story is superb and I love it. So there.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks so much, Evelyn! As I study Will, I am struck by the perfect storm of influences and experiences that shaped him…and perhaps there was something dark in him all along that thrived on it all. I am trying to uncover it as I write. The world he lived in was a study in wild disparity. I’m learning so much from this story!

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Evelyn K. Brunswick's avatar

Yeah - that's a serious and profound psychological question - are monsters born or made? Dysfunctional nature or dysfunctional nurture? I've thought about this sort of thing a lot myself and wrote a little series on these thoughts (it turned into more of a dissertation in the end). It does touch on so-called conspiracy theories a little but it's mainly psychology. Starts here if you ever have time (the four parts are a lot in total so I wouldn't blame anyone for not getting through it!). https://inadifferentplace.substack.com/p/circe-1-social-psychology-and-the?r=2s9hod

I think the horror genre is probably the ideal medium for exploring these sorts of questions, and elevates it into something more than just a frightfest.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Oh, yes, it IS the perfect medium for investigating the deep, dark tunnels of the psyche. I am going to start reading your series today! Nature vs. nurture is a slippery question. The answer is probably a bit of both in just the right (and frighteningly random) proportions.

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Tremendous. You have captured the time period and language. Spot on. I'm trying to think of the right single, descriptive word for this saga. I've settled on enthralling. I'm all in on this one Liz. - Jim

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Jim! I’m enjoying the time travel and learning how to make it authentic.

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Renee's avatar

So well done! These bits of Will’s history that lead to who he has become.

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Liz Zimmers's avatar

Thanks, Renee! It’s a bit like Build-a-Monster, lol.

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